{"id":315,"date":"2010-05-09T15:57:00","date_gmt":"2010-05-09T20:57:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blog.chloeneill.com\/?p=315"},"modified":"2010-05-09T15:57:00","modified_gmt":"2010-05-09T20:57:00","slug":"cv4-from-start-to-finish-part-ii-the-outline","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.chloeneill.com\/?p=315","title":{"rendered":"CV4 from Start to Finish &#8211; Part II: The Outline"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s time to revisit the creation of Book Four in the Chicagoland Vampires series (tentatively titled HARD BITTEN). I previously talked about <a href=\"http:\/\/chloeneill.blogspot.com\/2010\/04\/cv4-from-start-to-finish-part-i.html\">preparing and brainstorming<\/a>, so now we&#8217;re moving on to the ever-important stage two: the outlining. <\/p>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>It&#8217;s a bit of a cheat to call outlining the second stage, as this is really a process that will continue all the way through stage three (the actual writing). Sure, I&#8217;ll start with an outline, but I&#8217;ll also revise and adapt the outline as I write the novel. Here&#8217;s generally how it goes:<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><b>1. The Document:<\/b> I start with a blank document in Microsoft Word. The document will be divided into two parts. At the top of the page (in addition to the title), will be a &#8220;To Do&#8221; list. The rest of the document will be devoted to the actual outline. <\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><b>2. The To Do List:<\/b> This list takes the first position in the outline, because it&#8217;s where I&#8217;ll remind myself along the way of any details that still need to be added. It could be as simple as a word (&#8220;Darkening&#8221;) or a phrase (&#8220;add Mayor&#8221;).  I&#8217;ll either strikeout or remove items from the list as I go along.<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div><b>3. The Day-by-Day outline:<\/b> The rest of the document is comprised of a day-by-day outline. I organize on a daily basis because the day\/night distinction is important in both the CV novels (Merit&#8217;s unconscious during the day) and the DE novels (Lily is in school during weekdays). <\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>I don&#8217;t use a formal bulleted\/numbered outline. I just use dashes to designate each main activity, and then I&#8217;ll indent any subactivities or dialogue that I want to include in the scene. Thus, it looks something like this:<\/div>\n<div>\n<ul>\n<li>  Merit goes to the library to read.<\/li>\n<ul>\n<li>Merit talks to vampire.<\/li>\n<li>Merit reads book.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<li>Merit goes to sleep.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<div>I like using a word processing document because it allows me to edit as I write. Thus, if I decide that a scene needs to be moved from Day Two to Day Four, I can move parts around in the outline. [Using index cards in lieu of a word processing document would accomplish the same task, but I like being able to see the entire plot in a single document.]<\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>Since I don&#8217;t write sequentially (I don&#8217;t draft the scenes in order; I jump around), I use the highlight function in Microsoft Word to keep track of plots or things I still need to finish. Thus, the running list of scenes I need to finish might be highlighted in yellow, so that I can &#8220;unhighlight&#8221; each scene as it&#8217;s completed. <\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>Alternately, I might highlight romance plot scenes in one color and mystery plot scenes in another so that I can get a visual feel for how the plot is developing through the book. If I scroll through a five-page outline and one of the colors doesn&#8217;t pop up until page three, it&#8217;s a clue that I need to work on the development of that particular plot earlier in the novel. <\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n<div>And that&#8217;s about it. Once the outline is preliminarily drafted, I&#8217;ll send it off to my editor for her reference, and then I&#8217;ll start writing! But that&#8217;s Part Three . . . <\/div>\n<div> <\/div>\n<div><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>It&#8217;s time to revisit the creation of Book Four in the Chicagoland Vampires series (tentatively titled HARD BITTEN). I previously talked about preparing and brainstorming, so now we&#8217;re moving on to the ever-important stage two: the outlining. 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